We tell people to add personal stories, highlight insights, and evoke emotion. We know that these are effective techniques, but why?
Itâs because they make the reader resonate with the author.
The sense of connection creates engagement.
In Brazilian Jiu-Jitsu (BJJ), there is a concept of âhooks.â A BJJ player uses their limbs as leverage points to control the opponent. Â
In writing, we use âresonance hooksâ to engage our readers. The more ways we have for the reader to empathize or relate to the essay, the more the reader will get lost into the flow.
This is why you have stories.
This is why you write clearly.
This is why you have metaphors.
This is why you write with a person in mind.
But you need to balance placing as many resonance hooks with getting your point across. You may want to target your resonance hooks at your audience.
I could have started this essay with my first BJJ class, how I was spun like a top and felt more helpless than a baby. This would have thrust you in the middle of the action. But most of you arenât BJJ fanatics, and the story wouldnât have resonated with you. This newsletter is about ideas, this specific essay is about writing. You might skip the section, delete the newsletter, or even unsubscribe. Instead, I started by talking about becoming a better writer, because I know thatâs what a lot of you are interested in.
Hooks allow you to guide the reader, to leverage their attention.
In BJJ, with the right technique, you can control your opponent. In writing, if you resonate with your reader, you entertain, teach, and convince.
Discoveries:
This cohort of Newsletter Launchpad had a ton of great new newsletters. I wish I had room to share all of them, but here are some standouts:Â
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dives behind the seemingly mundane events to expose insights he finds. Here, he shows how he learned to become a leader accidentally. Donât miss his visuals are gripping, too.đ Are you a âChosen Leaderâ?
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's first issue is the heartfelt tale of how he confronted panic attacks, and even worse, the fear of panic attacks.đ Extending the Window of Tolerance
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explores the branching paths our lives take. We can regret roads not taken, or we can embrace the opportunities that open up.đ Fractal Lives
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writes about how reality was a shock from his childhood idealism, and how he overcame that disillusionment. Disillusionment is created by the gap between expectations and reality.đ Overcoming Disillusionment
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talks about the hidden lessons that you need when going self-employed. Leaving your job is a huge step, and he shows how to prepare the way.đ Going Solo: Unleash Your Potential
Quote of the Week:
"Give me a lever long enough and a fulcrum on which to place it, and I shall move the world." â Archimedes
Something Fun:
Chef and Food Writer Anthony Bourdain had a semi-hidden passion for BJJ in his last years. I didnât know he was a frequent Reddit commentator, with his trademark writing style.
đ The Lost Diary of Anthony Bourdain
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Leaving you in peace,
Chris
Enjoyed the article Chris. I especially enjoyed the link to Anthony Bourdainâs diary. I love his writing and recently started (and Iâm becoming obsessed with) BJJ myself, so his writing on the topic is a real find.
Chris, thanks for the shoutout and for all the great lessons in the Newsletter Launchpad course! Speaking of "hooks" - I think I'm really getting hooked on writing online. The feeling of forging a resonant connection with the reader is really addictive!